Double Star Final ( I hope!)

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masonblack
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Double Star Final ( I hope!)

Post by masonblack » December 6th, 2011, 2:35 pm

Here we go again. One more time (I hope!)

Dear Agent:

When seventeen-year-old Ally Ashworth is forced through a passage and winds up in another world, she has no idea she’s delivering a key that could unleash a demon and ignite the next world war. She’s been brought here by Cepheus, a dark god whose intent was to simply take what she carries but the winds have blown her out of his reach and into the forest of Gilgamesh - the only place where he’s powerless.

Ally is befriended by Liam Cheveyo and his friends. And, after she sees them shape-shift into their freaky, animal humanimal counterparts, she smacks hard into two realizations - she’s landed in a place where the ancient gods are more than just a myth and this world isn’t where she belongs. She also discovers a growing romance with Liam, and some magic of her own. In this world, she’s stronger. Better. She’s able to protect those around her and keep Death away. When she’s caught in a trap set by the creepy spider- boy sent by Cepheus to retrieve her, she needs a miracle.

But, in this world, she’s an angel and together with Liam and the others, they are the pieces that form the whole. They are The Eight, a magical covenant who, together, are strong enough to defeat Cepheus ... if Liam can rescue her in time.

But he has to. The survival of both their worlds depend on it.

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Re: Double Star Final ( I hope!)

Post by wilderness » December 6th, 2011, 7:05 pm

Hi Mason,
You should post your revised query in the original thread per the guidelines so all your changes can be viewed together. :)

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