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Inconsistent Prose?

Post by MrsMojoRider » January 25th, 2011, 5:05 pm

What does it mean when an agent tells you that there are some spots with inconsistent prose in your ms? Is this just a euphamism for bad writing?

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Re: Inconsistent Prose?

Post by polymath » January 25th, 2011, 5:24 pm

I can think of so many different ways prose can be inconsistent that it would make such a statement meaningless.

Bruce Sterling's "Turkey City Lexicon" hosted by SFWA has a short list of a few dozen of the more common problems specific to science fiction and fantasy and writing in general;

http://www.sfwa.org/2009/06/turkey-city ... -workshops

"Bathos" is one deserving special attention as pertains to inconsistent prose.
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