Requesting advice and suggestions for my first book "The Adopted Daughter"

[dnjeruus]

Hello,

My name is Diana Njeru a Kenyan citizen currently in Kenya. I have been thinking about writing a book and was unsure whether to put all my ideas and thoughts on paper. After weeks of pondering, I finally decided to open my laptop and start typing.
Since mid-September till today, I have written over 70 pages close to 35,000 words. This is my first time to take on the task of writing. I am quite worried, but it is the fact of having the determination, devotion, and confidence that has given me the courage to start writing.
I hope to get your advice and suggestions on the first 70 pages of my book called "The Adopted Daughter" I have attached the copy.

Thank you.
Diana Njeru

[dnjeruus]

Hello,
Unfortunately, i am unable to attach a copy of the book. Let me know if you would like to have a read and wil send it to you via email.
Thank you.
Cheers,
Diana

[emilianojay]

If you haven’t already, consider creating an outline. This can help you organize your thoughts and ensure a coherent flow throughout your book.

[dnjeruus]

Hello,

Thank you for your reply. I have actually started writing the book and have currently reached Chapter 37, have three more chapters to go and the book will be finished. I uploaded my book on Webnovel and have received collections and my book has been recommended. I am hoping to have more recommendations and an opportunity to get it published. Let me know if you wish to read it and will send you a copy.

[dnjeruus]

Thank you Lawrence for your reply and advice.

I have actually started writing the book and have even gotten an opportunity to have a chapter or two published every week. Thus far have written 40 chapters with the hope of completing the book soon.

I have also come up with five titles and new ideas for my next books. I have already started writing the second one, so hopefully all will go well.

Thank you
Diana