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by KimErickson
November 17th, 2013, 9:20 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: STRINGS OF FATE-Any advice?
Replies: 3
Views: 1824

Re: STRINGS OF FATE-Any advice?

That was so helpful! Thank you both!!
by KimErickson
October 9th, 2013, 4:23 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query for In Death
Replies: 2
Views: 2215

Re: Query for In Death

"NEVER QUOTE YOUR BOOK! Is that why this is in italics? If so, I would take it out of italics. Falling for a dead guy isn’t part of Santana Jones’ plans take out, but John Braver, the incredibly charming and incredibly dead politician on the other side of the mirror, makes it really hard not to. Thi...
by KimErickson
October 9th, 2013, 4:18 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: YA Sci-Fi Fantasy: Satellite Hearts
Replies: 4
Views: 2121

Re: YA Sci-Fi Fantasy: Satellite Hearts

I really like this query--I remember seeing it on agentqueryconnect. But let me say this. The first line could use some work. Kamikaze is a bit strong of a word, and it gives off the idea that the rest will be about Japanese suicide. Plus, it's hard to say. Reading it in my mind, it didn't make a lo...
by KimErickson
October 9th, 2013, 4:13 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: STRINGS OF FATE-Any advice?
Replies: 3
Views: 1824

STRINGS OF FATE-Any advice?

This is my first day on the forums, so I'd like to say hi:) So here is my query for STRINGS OF FATe. Any ideas would be useful:D Dear (Agent Name Here): Lila Marbles is a Grecian Fate who just wants to bake cookies. Unfortunately for snarky eighteen-year-old Lila, that doesn’t seem like it’s in her ...