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by Sadi
August 20th, 2012, 6:35 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Recurrent Universe
Replies: 3
Views: 1130

Re: Recurrent Universe

Humans are born free but everywhere they are in chains. In Afghanistan 1998, two soldiers, Taj and Bek, are stationed at a check point near Taloqan, a city in the hands of Anti-Taliban Resistance army. Taj doesn’t remember a day in his life without war. Raised in a lawless society and courteous cult...
by Sadi
August 18th, 2012, 9:53 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Recurrent Universe
Replies: 3
Views: 1130

Recurrent Universe

Dear Ms. Agent, In Afghanistan 1998, four soldiers are stationed at a checkpoint near Taloqan, a city in the hands of the Anti-Taliban Resistance Army. They live in a small recurrent universe of their own, having cut their connections to the rest of the world. Less than ten cars pass by their checkp...
by Sadi
July 29th, 2012, 8:07 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: A Sky of Stars
Replies: 1
Views: 849

A Sky of Stars

Dear Ms. agent, Wars are fought to bring about peace. When professional mercenary Taj befriends an ascetic and a philosopher he comes to know that life is worth much more than killing. He leaves soldiering and returns to his hometown, promising not to indulge in bloodshed again. But things change wh...
by Sadi
July 29th, 2012, 8:06 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: A Sky of Stars
Replies: 0
Views: 654

A Sky of Stars

Dear Ms. agent, Wars are fought to bring about peace. When professional mercenary Taj befriends an ascetic and a philosopher he comes to know that life is worth much more than killing. He leaves soldiering and returns to his hometown, promising not to indulge in bloodshed again. But things change wh...
by Sadi
July 27th, 2012, 3:42 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Replies: 8
Views: 1707

Re: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction

Is this an improvement? Dear Ms. agent, Wars are fought to bring about peace. When professional mercenary Taj befriends an ascetic and a philosopher he comes to know life is worth much more than killing. He leaves soldiering and returns to his hometown, promising not to indulge in bloodshed again. B...
by Sadi
July 26th, 2012, 3:20 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Replies: 8
Views: 1707

Re: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction

Dear Ms. Agent, Taj is a professional mercenary who has grown to believe that war is a way of life, and Sarv is another mercenary who has recently joined the profession. Taj and Sarv develop camaraderie while they are at a checkpoint on the outskirts of Taloqan, one of few cities in the north of Afg...
by Sadi
July 25th, 2012, 10:26 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Replies: 8
Views: 1707

Re: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction

Here's another stab. Dear Ms. Agent, Taj is a professional mercenary who has grown to believe that war is a way of life, and Arsh is another who has recently joined the profession. Taj and Arsh develop camaraderie while they are at a checkpoint on the outskirts of Taloqan, one of few cities in the n...
by Sadi
July 25th, 2012, 10:25 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Replies: 8
Views: 1707

Re: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction

Here's another stab. Dear Ms. Agent, Taj is a professional mercenary who has grown to believe that war is a way of life, and Arsh is another who has recently joined the profession. Taj and Arsh develop camaraderie while they are at a checkpoint on the outskirts of Taloqan, one of few cities in the n...
by Sadi
July 24th, 2012, 1:20 pm
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Replies: 0
Views: 4200

SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction

All right, since I'm a perfectionist, I worked more on my synopsis. Because it's a literary fiction I quoted my characters and added their believes to the synopsis. I hope it's better than the previous one. TAJ is a professional mercenary who has grown to believe that war is a way of life, and BEK i...
by Sadi
July 24th, 2012, 11:22 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Replies: 8
Views: 1707

SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction

Dear Ms. agent, When guns speak, morality is silent. Taj is a cruel mercenary who believes that war is a way of life, and Arsh is another who is low on cruelty and other skills a mercenary need. The two are comrades stationed at a checkpoint on the outskirts of Taloqan, one of few cities in north of...