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by MitchTacy
July 10th, 2011, 10:07 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Marked - New Adult Dystopian -- First Chapter
Replies: 3
Views: 1571

Re: Marked - New Adult Dystopian -- First Chapter

Let me start by saying I think you have a nice starting premise. It feels sort of like an homage to The Giver. Already in the first chapter you've let in an appropriate amount of exposition, and you've introduced a lot of characters from which you can either create from them some backstory or leave ...
by MitchTacy
July 10th, 2011, 9:10 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 312632

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Being Released Genre: Psychological Thriller (223 words, excluding heading) Part I: Asylum There was a creak, a thump, a slam, and then silence. It was all I heard, but it was enough for me to know that someone was joining me. Finally, somebody else was here. Whenever I get a new cellmate, it...