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by Deja
July 10th, 2010, 9:50 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Naughty Gnomes - Romantic Comedy - Polished for Querying
Replies: 12
Views: 2517

Re: Naughty Gnomes - Romantic Comedy - Polished for Querying

Sea, I absolutely love where this is going now that I know a little bit more! So unique and I hesitate to say it, adorable. The idea of the character who works in the mortuary in order to avoid her little mishaps is delightful, especially because she doesn't even realize the phycological ramificatio...
by Deja
July 9th, 2010, 9:07 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Naughty Gnomes - Romantic Comedy - Polished for Querying
Replies: 12
Views: 2517

Re: Naughty Gnomes - Romantic Comedy - Polished for Querying

First of all, I love your voice throughout and your pace kept up well. I really enjoyed the story. I am not sure just how the Gnomes fit in, but you mentioned it was a novel so I may see them later. I am not quite sure if this is a first chapter or a short story. I do like it through. There are some...
by Deja
July 7th, 2010, 12:30 pm
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: Synopsis - The Fountain's Edge
Replies: 6
Views: 2088

Re: Synopsis - The Fountain's Edge

Wow! I love the revisions and the idea is sound, though I do think that there are some verisimilitude issues within the story. The main things I have are the mirror and the fairy lord and lady. I am sure that within the story itself they are well laid out in detail so they aren't randomly dropped in...