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- April 23rd, 2020, 8:12 pm
- Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
- Topic: Seeking a CP for Upper YA portal Fantasy
- Replies: 1
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Seeking a CP for Upper YA portal Fantasy
Hello, I'm seeking a CP for my 94,000 word Young Adult portal fantasy. The story contains historical and sci-fi elements that tie the plot together and make it believable. This is my third round of edits and I've already cut thirty thousand words and counting, from my MS. I've received critiques fro...
- April 23rd, 2020, 6:34 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 209
- Views: 182484
Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
The first 250 words of my Young Adult portal fantasy The winged lion stood by the exit to the Phoenician exhibit like a bronze sentry, tarnished and faded by time. I bid the statue a silent goodbye as I passed it. After pulling an eight-hour shift answering questions about all things ancient, I just...
- April 10th, 2020, 5:51 pm
- Forum: Town Hall
- Topic: The Introduction Thread
- Replies: 647
- Views: 410498
Re: The Introduction Thread
Hi everyone, my name is Andrea Franco-Cook. I reside in West Virginia, but I'm preparing for a big move to Wyoming. I'm originally from the Bay area, so it will be nice to be on the Western half of the U.S., again. In the writing world, I've self-published an adult fantasy. I also recently completed...
- April 10th, 2020, 4:53 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 209
- Views: 182484
Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Chapter One Title: The Parallel Genre: Young Adult portal fantasy with Sci-Fi elements The winged lion stood by the exit to the Phoenician exhibit like a bronze sentry, tarnished and faded by time. I bid the statue a silent goodbye as I passed it. After pulling an eight-hour shift answering question...
- April 7th, 2020, 11:26 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 155
- Views: 128207
Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Dear Agent (this was addressed to an agent I heard speak last year); I enjoyed hearing you speak at the Pittsburgh Writers Conference last spring where you mentioned that you were a fan of time travel stories with an interesting twist. Therefore, I thought my Young Adult portal fantasy, THE PARALLEL...