Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Hi, I am a first time writer and am looking for someone to offer me an objective critique of my novel in progress "Sins of the Father" (working title). Feedback from friends and family so far has been great, but would like people with no personal connection to take a look .

The story is a Paranormal adventure through 300 years of one family's history at the Bradford Estate. Sharon Bradford tries to unravel the mysteries of her late husband's family's dark and secretive past. What will she uncover? Where did it all begin? Who are the children and why are they still there?

Any takers?

Hey. Im looking for someone to swap with as Im also a first time writer writing a Supernatural fantasy novel. Are you still looking for someone?