Need Help With Query

[LurkingVirologist]

I need more stakes!

Hah! I was waiting for that pun!

Garnell - I think you are in pretty good shape here. Sit on it for a week and then give it one more look?

[garnell wallace]

I intend to do just that and focus on perfecting the book before I begin quering agents in September. While I wait to hear from them I'll begin work on the dreaded synopsis but after revising the book four times and the query about forty, I'm hoping writing the synopsis won't be as difficult. But then again... this is the writing life we all love so much. Hopefully I can at least put the query in the finished pile. Thanks so much to EVERYONE who helped me. I have no ego when it comes to critiquing my work, I just want it the best it can be.