Wolf-Killer opening YA, Gothic Fantasy
Posted: December 2nd, 2010, 1:59 pm
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Yeah, I was going to comment on this before and it disappeared. Just as a quick observation, I have to say this version reads much clearer. I do like the third person voice for this.
If you want more in-depth critique/line-edit type critique leave it up and people will get to it when they have time.