Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Hi everyone Among Us Online

I am in the process of writing my first novel manuscript, but I am having a big problem: keeping my voice and style consistent from start to finish. Sometimes I find the voice leans towards detailed description, other times it leans towards fast-paced, rapid-fire dialogue. This makes me worry that when readers approach it, they will find it disjointed and lacking coherence.

I have tried a few ways, such as:

• Reread and edit immediately after writing each chapter.

• Take notes on the "tone" of the characters and the atmosphere of the scene.

• Compare the newly written paragraph with previous chapters.

But it is still not really effective.

I would like to ask those of you with experience:

• How can I practice or control my voice better when writing long works?

• Are there any supporting tools (such as software, checklists, or rereading techniques) that you find useful?

• Is it a good thing that the tone changes slightly as the story progresses, or is it necessary to maintain absolute consistency?

I would love to hear from everyone, especially those who have completed or published novels.

Thank you, everyone!

Really important ideas and establishing connections. Your sharing is really the problem when setting up and building a suitable series. Enjoy the approach and learning more about creating quality novels.

It's impressive that you're dedicated to refining your voice in your novel manuscript. Consistency can indeed be challenging, especially with varying tones. Have you considered creating a style guide for your work? This could include character profiles, scene descriptions, and specific dialogue patterns to maintain a cohesive voice throughout.

Is it intimate and reflective, or fast-paced and energetic?

I've been waiting for an answer for too long!