Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Before returning to the query trenches, I'd like to have someone else read my story and offer feeback. Honest (not rude) feedback on characters, plot and pacing.
Pitch: An immortal man and a revived woman join forces to find a long-lost powerful stone for the devil: if they succeed, he will finally be able to die, and she won't be sent back to hell.

Word count: 109K

Trigger warnings: mentions of suicide attempts, violence, some gore, past abusive relationship

I will gladly critique work back in Fantasy and all of its subgenres, either YA, New Adult or Adult. Weekly exchanges would be ideal, but any arrangements can be discussed.

Hi! Your book sounds amazing and if you're interested I would happy to provide feedback on it!
I'm very new to writing (and this website) but I have helped friends with their writing, so I can only give in depth feedback as a reader and a target audience for your book, rather than someone who can comment specifically on technique.
I am currently my own novel (though not completed) and am looking for help with it and exchanging feedback weekly sounds perfect for me.
Let me know!