Looking for 1 or 2 CP/Beta reader for 109K Adult Fantasy

Critique partners are worth their weight in gold. So (checking financial page) like $20,000 a pound.
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Thejcluiz
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Looking for 1 or 2 CP/Beta reader for 109K Adult Fantasy

Post by Thejcluiz » January 19th, 2024, 4:22 pm

Before returning to the query trenches, I'd like to have someone else read my story and offer feeback. Honest (not rude) feedback on characters, plot and pacing.
Pitch: An immortal man and a revived woman join forces to find a long-lost powerful stone for the devil: if they succeed, he will finally be able to die, and she won't be sent back to hell.

Word count: 109K

Trigger warnings: mentions of suicide attempts, violence, some gore, past abusive relationship

I will gladly critique work back in Fantasy and all of its subgenres, either YA, New Adult or Adult. Weekly exchanges would be ideal, but any arrangements can be discussed.

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