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YA Adventure

Posted: September 10th, 2023, 4:29 pm
by Gail
TURRET HOUSE
Fourteen-year-old Jessie’s observation that the turret house looks like a huge wedding cake suitable for Frankenstein’s bride seems ever more appropriate when she finds the remains of an infant in its
OFF LIMITS basement.

This blurb is for a completed 90k, YA fiction adventure novel set in 1958 on the Oregon coast. I will happily forward a one page or ten page synopsis and or sample chapters on request.
Thank you for your consideration.
(contact info would be attached

Re: YA Adventure

Posted: December 7th, 2023, 11:59 pm
by nkk
I'm not hooked by this blurb. Is this a murder mystery or a horror story? Also, I find the sentence too long. Maybe split the sentences.