YA Adventure

[Gail]

TURRET HOUSE
Fourteen-year-old Jessie’s observation that the turret house looks like a huge wedding cake suitable for Frankenstein’s bride seems ever more appropriate when she finds the remains of an infant in its
OFF LIMITS basement.

This blurb is for a completed 90k, YA fiction adventure novel set in 1958 on the Oregon coast. I will happily forward a one page or ten page synopsis and or sample chapters on request.
Thank you for your consideration.
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[nkk]

I'm not hooked by this blurb. Is this a murder mystery or a horror story? Also, I find the sentence too long. Maybe split the sentences.