Query: YA Fantasy
Posted: February 17th, 2023, 4:51 pm
Hello writers, I'm looking for some feedback on the synopsis portion of my query letter. The book is YA Fantasy, loads of twists and turns, and I've had some trouble narrowing down the important points. I'd love to hear your thoughts, thanks for reading!
Everly Peris was just an average sixteen year-old girl, born in Akravahsta, with mediocre powers. But when she crosses the impenetrable veil to Empyriam, she discovers that everything she knew about her past was a lie. Magic has brought her home, to the land where she was born, to a web of secrets and a conspiracy that puts her life in danger.
The Ternion was long gone, the key to unlimited power was destroyed and the cursed tome sealed shut forever. Only someone wants to reignite its magic, make it whole again, and if they want the world to bow at their feet, they’ll need Everly to bring down the veil.
On the run from fearsome foes, Everly meets Noa Berrie, the avid scholar, an aspiring warrior named Cressia, the rambunctious Psyler, and the cousins, Sydnee and Blu. Coincidence, it seems, has brought them together, but destiny has played its hand.
As an ancient prophecy comes to light, unearthing the hidden history of the Ternion, the six strangers find themselves intrinsically bound to its protection. The fate of Empyriam is laid before them, a destiny that may just kill them, which begs the question:
How are six teenagers supposed to save the world?
Everly Peris was just an average sixteen year-old girl, born in Akravahsta, with mediocre powers. But when she crosses the impenetrable veil to Empyriam, she discovers that everything she knew about her past was a lie. Magic has brought her home, to the land where she was born, to a web of secrets and a conspiracy that puts her life in danger.
The Ternion was long gone, the key to unlimited power was destroyed and the cursed tome sealed shut forever. Only someone wants to reignite its magic, make it whole again, and if they want the world to bow at their feet, they’ll need Everly to bring down the veil.
On the run from fearsome foes, Everly meets Noa Berrie, the avid scholar, an aspiring warrior named Cressia, the rambunctious Psyler, and the cousins, Sydnee and Blu. Coincidence, it seems, has brought them together, but destiny has played its hand.
As an ancient prophecy comes to light, unearthing the hidden history of the Ternion, the six strangers find themselves intrinsically bound to its protection. The fate of Empyriam is laid before them, a destiny that may just kill them, which begs the question:
How are six teenagers supposed to save the world?