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Looking for critique partner/beta reader for 90k adult fantasy novel

Posted: October 24th, 2022, 12:48 pm
by AshParker
Hi there! My name is Ash. I'm looking for a fresh set of eyes on a 90k fantasy novel. It's been through a lot of drafts but I'm stuck in my head after working on it for a while.

The story sees Ifry, the put-upon clerk to an entrepeneur, travel to the mountains with his employer. They plan to turn a rural town into an expensive ski resort. It is far from a friendly environment, as Ifry comes up against the creatures that dwell in the mountains, and the curious religion practised by the locals. Ifry finds himself drawn to a local hunter, Jos, unaware of the danger he poses, or the task he has been given by the gods to perform.

If anyone is interested, please let me know! Thanks!