Re: e.g., CP ask: "Fix My Phrase"...pls pick your favorite version: 1a? 1b? 1c? 1d? 1e? 1f? 1g?..........genres=OpEd,etc
Posted: July 24th, 2021, 12:51 pm
While interesting, your post seems off-topic both for the Critique Partner section and probably for this writing website in general. I'll leave it here but I suggest you post any follow-ups in the “Procrastination” section or, if you intend to publish it elsewhere and really want feedback, in the “Excerpts” section.