Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Maybe start with chapter one. It's more digestible, which should garner you more readers, and the comments will likely be easier for you to read. Then you can add subsequent chapters. Alternatively, if you have a website, you can post a link and put the whole thing up if that format is easier on the eyes.

I agree with Hillary3 - and you can get a feel for a book in the opening pages is my view