Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I <3 you guys :)!! Thank you all for taking the time to read this and make suggestions.

I especially love the suggestions about better verbs/cutting out the passive voice. That is my biggest writing weakness, and I hacked and burned it out of my manuscript, but not out of my query! Oy vey. It's all a learning process ;).

Thanks again for all the help! You rock!