Re: History Longshot
Posted: December 4th, 2010, 9:32 am
I'm a huge bible fan.
I first had a children's illustrated bible with just the coolest selection of the key dramatic stories. It was awesome literature.
I read the full bible from a different perspective with Jesus being the only person serving god and the rest playing at it like Monopoly.
I am a native american raised by christian nuns and except for occasionally pulling my ears for pulling on girls pony tails, they were very kind to me.
I've read every American presidents biography, doubled and trebled for the modern presidents and their opposing acolytes in the opinion bias schools.
Thankfully I was forced to read all the classics by said nun's and was encouraged/forced to read; "The Rise And Fall of The Third Reich" when ten years old
because of my addiction to the old COMBAT television show with Vic Morrow. They also took me to the Plymouth Plantation where Chief Massasoit's character
explained to me that he welcomed the Pilgrims because his tribe was decimated by a bacteria infection and was a afraid the Narragansett tribe from Rhode Island would try to capitalize on his lack of warriors to defend his territory. When I asked out loud about the white man giving the indians small pox on purpose he never blinked an eye and said with droll effect "We traded the white man syphilis for small pox it was a fair trade." The nuns giggled but I didn't get the joke.
James Michener wrote a lot of historic based fiction that I found quite engaging, but also helped me to break my one main character crutch-addiction to enjoying narrative.
I'm writing a experimental work where Jesus is a bounty hunter time-traveler who is able to convince Enoch-Bob Dylan to knock off telling Almighty how to run the great game of life. Unfortunately he can't convince John The Divine to chill so that character reincarnates as John Lennon and gets popped by his fellow Time Mafia cohorts afraid he'll pull off his Revolution No. 9 bid to sabotage Almighty. Jimi Hendrix is dual character as Moses and a benign character (Bailey)living two lives, one as a musician and one looking (keeping an eye out) after an incarnated version of the Holy Ghost as a little boy who can create or dismantle anything by spoken or written command but spends most of his time enjoying being a little boy, until discovered by the government and forced to exit the daily world. His body is then maned by Jesus until a great crisis in 1979. The part of Jesus coming down from a cloud is there except he is traveling backwards in time as "The Son of Man" to rescue the Holy Ghost and serve as a shield and sword of fire until the body reaches 1979.
"The son of man shall come as a thief in the night and no-one shall know of his arrival"
It is an awesome story.
I've been told it shall never get published.
Every query has brought a partial or full manuscript request.
I'm finishing the final stages of a the third volume 343,000 words so far vol-123.
Book one and two are finished. If your a holy ghost christian maybe you would consider critiquing it.
The main character is here to repair the Zero Point Engines that maintain linear time.
Lord - God - Almighty are treated a three distinctive functions of the Holy of Holies (one supreme infinite one) beyond creation borders/event horizon.
Satan is treated as Jesus's body guard who has failed to protect Jesus and is crestfallen based on the original fourty days of negotiations they spent in
the desert before Jesus began his Mission. "Get yea behind me Satan.)
Most people overlook or negatively dramatise Satans relationship to the three fold Lord-God-Almighty function-person assignments.
The devil satan lucifer functions are performed by three young boys who are eternal manifestations of creations three Zero Point Engines
IPhaseVols1-3.pdf
https://sites.google.com/site/intraphase/documents
If ever you have time give it a go and let me know what resonates with you and what offends you theologically.
I would be happy to critique anything you need critiqued in return.
Character map.
Quantum Worldlines
Zero/Pierce
-----8----19--------25
Buddha-Jesus-King Artorius
Lennon-Dylan-Jimi Hendrix
44-55
Son of Man - Chief Massasoit.
Traveling in The Native who found
Two Directions The Zero Point Engines in 1616AD
I first had a children's illustrated bible with just the coolest selection of the key dramatic stories. It was awesome literature.
I read the full bible from a different perspective with Jesus being the only person serving god and the rest playing at it like Monopoly.
I am a native american raised by christian nuns and except for occasionally pulling my ears for pulling on girls pony tails, they were very kind to me.
I've read every American presidents biography, doubled and trebled for the modern presidents and their opposing acolytes in the opinion bias schools.
Thankfully I was forced to read all the classics by said nun's and was encouraged/forced to read; "The Rise And Fall of The Third Reich" when ten years old
because of my addiction to the old COMBAT television show with Vic Morrow. They also took me to the Plymouth Plantation where Chief Massasoit's character
explained to me that he welcomed the Pilgrims because his tribe was decimated by a bacteria infection and was a afraid the Narragansett tribe from Rhode Island would try to capitalize on his lack of warriors to defend his territory. When I asked out loud about the white man giving the indians small pox on purpose he never blinked an eye and said with droll effect "We traded the white man syphilis for small pox it was a fair trade." The nuns giggled but I didn't get the joke.
James Michener wrote a lot of historic based fiction that I found quite engaging, but also helped me to break my one main character crutch-addiction to enjoying narrative.
I'm writing a experimental work where Jesus is a bounty hunter time-traveler who is able to convince Enoch-Bob Dylan to knock off telling Almighty how to run the great game of life. Unfortunately he can't convince John The Divine to chill so that character reincarnates as John Lennon and gets popped by his fellow Time Mafia cohorts afraid he'll pull off his Revolution No. 9 bid to sabotage Almighty. Jimi Hendrix is dual character as Moses and a benign character (Bailey)living two lives, one as a musician and one looking (keeping an eye out) after an incarnated version of the Holy Ghost as a little boy who can create or dismantle anything by spoken or written command but spends most of his time enjoying being a little boy, until discovered by the government and forced to exit the daily world. His body is then maned by Jesus until a great crisis in 1979. The part of Jesus coming down from a cloud is there except he is traveling backwards in time as "The Son of Man" to rescue the Holy Ghost and serve as a shield and sword of fire until the body reaches 1979.
"The son of man shall come as a thief in the night and no-one shall know of his arrival"
It is an awesome story.
I've been told it shall never get published.
Every query has brought a partial or full manuscript request.
I'm finishing the final stages of a the third volume 343,000 words so far vol-123.
Book one and two are finished. If your a holy ghost christian maybe you would consider critiquing it.
The main character is here to repair the Zero Point Engines that maintain linear time.
Lord - God - Almighty are treated a three distinctive functions of the Holy of Holies (one supreme infinite one) beyond creation borders/event horizon.
Satan is treated as Jesus's body guard who has failed to protect Jesus and is crestfallen based on the original fourty days of negotiations they spent in
the desert before Jesus began his Mission. "Get yea behind me Satan.)
Most people overlook or negatively dramatise Satans relationship to the three fold Lord-God-Almighty function-person assignments.
The devil satan lucifer functions are performed by three young boys who are eternal manifestations of creations three Zero Point Engines
IPhaseVols1-3.pdf
https://sites.google.com/site/intraphase/documents
If ever you have time give it a go and let me know what resonates with you and what offends you theologically.
I would be happy to critique anything you need critiqued in return.
Character map.
Quantum Worldlines
Zero/Pierce
-----8----19--------25
Buddha-Jesus-King Artorius
Lennon-Dylan-Jimi Hendrix
44-55
Son of Man - Chief Massasoit.
Traveling in The Native who found
Two Directions The Zero Point Engines in 1616AD