Do you have any little writing issues THAT cause you trouble?

Amanda Elizabeth wrote:The vice president at my first job out of college had a huge issue with the word "that" so I learned it's use pretty quickly
I still fall into the habit of double spacing after periods. When I went through my manuscript and did a find-replace changing all . + double space to . + single space it went down by 7,000 characters. Oops.
Yes, this is why it's taking so long. I'm going to each individual instance and mentally removing the "that" to see if it makes sense. Some sentences have to re-worked as a result. Which is a good thing since I have a tendancy to use more words than needed. I'm definitely a short story long type of person!Amanda Elizabeth wrote:Be careful, because it is needed sometimes. I always check whether it is correct or not by removing the "that _____" clause -- if the sentence loses meaning it means "that" is correct. "Movies that are violent are not good for children." If you remove "that are violent" the sentence doesn't make sense since obviously some movies are good for children.
99% of the time your sentence can be improved by taking out the "that" and rearranging how you're writing. So in your example, the sentence would be better written as:Amanda Elizabeth wrote:Be careful, because it is needed sometimes. I always check whether it is correct or not by removing the "that _____" clause -- if the sentence loses meaning it means "that" is correct. "Movies that are violent are not good for children." If you remove "that are violent" the sentence doesn't make sense since obviously some movies are good for children.
Oh lordy so do mine. Smiling is the worst one for me. And "was" seems to breed on the page.dios4vida wrote:My characters "look" at everything. They do stuff with their hands, and I tend to describe emotion through their eyes a lot, but my goodness do they "look" at everything, all the time. It's ridiculous. (They also like to "smile", "grin", "glance", and "glare".)
Another good one. My characters smile and sigh a lot. I was able to pare it down a bit after I caught myself thinking, "She's smiling again? Geex, what a happy fool!"dios4vida wrote:My characters "look" at everything. They do stuff with their hands, and I tend to describe emotion through their eyes a lot, but my goodness do they "look" at everything, all the time. It's ridiculous. (They also like to "smile", "grin", "glance", and "glare".)
Thanks Mira! After wrangling with my formatting for two days, I finally cleared the checks at Smashwords. Now I'm trying to figure out how to get it right on Kindle Direct. Big sigh.mira wrote:Hey good luck with the upload - and congratulations!
I LOVE Adverbs. I'm not completely convinced I can't keep SOME of them in, but I do have to pare abit.
Fun question.
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