Historical Fiction: 1st page. The Great...
Historical Fiction: 1st page. The Great...
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Last edited by itobias on August 17th, 2011, 11:12 am, edited 2 times in total.
Re: Historical Fiction: 1st page. The Great...
While this is well-written, it just doesn't give me a picture of the MC, the time period, where it takes place or any of the things that might excite me.
Is he a rebel?
Is he going to enter some great conflict?
What is his status other than renting a cheap place from a landlord he doesn't like?
Why should I care about HIM?
What makes his story different from so many others?
These, to me, are things you need to bring out early in your story. Draw me in quickly.
My blog: http://lvcabbie@blogspot.com
Is he a rebel?
Is he going to enter some great conflict?
What is his status other than renting a cheap place from a landlord he doesn't like?
Why should I care about HIM?
What makes his story different from so many others?
These, to me, are things you need to bring out early in your story. Draw me in quickly.
My blog: http://lvcabbie@blogspot.com
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