Before returning to the query trenches, I'd like to have someone else read my story and offer feeback. Honest (not rude) feedback on characters, plot and pacing.
Pitch: An immortal man and a revived woman join forces to find a long-lost powerful stone for the devil: if they succeed, he will finally be able to die, and she won't be sent back to hell.
Word count: 109K
Trigger warnings: mentions of suicide attempts, violence, some gore, past abusive relationship
I will gladly critique work back in Fantasy and all of its subgenres, either YA, New Adult or Adult. Weekly exchanges would be ideal, but any arrangements can be discussed.
Looking for 1 or 2 CP/Beta reader for 109K Adult Fantasy
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