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Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 11th, 2010, 1:36 pm
by Down the well
Anyone querying, or thinking about sending a query, needs to read this. Really. Do it now. Go.


http://www.jmtohline.com/2010/12/bigges ... -when.html


It's from writer JM Tohline, and I hope he doesn't mind me linking to his blog, but this information is too valuable not to pass on.

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 11th, 2010, 2:31 pm
by Watcher55
Life is so cool when someone does you a favor and ends up doing you two. Not only is this a great article, but Tohline included the perspective of the agent I want working for me.

Thanks

This one made me say: NO WAY!
And finally (I hope I don't have to tell you this, but…), you never do this either (courtesy of Helen Breitwieser) –

A guy once Googled me and used my younger sister's name and my high school in a query letter, as in, "imagine your sister (insert name here) was found dead in the trunk of a car in the parking lot of (insert high school here)" then he wrote, "now that I have your attention." Bad idea.

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 11th, 2010, 3:32 pm
by Netti
Ah, but here's my question. They want us to be respectful to them by putting their name in the salutation. Why can't they take five seconds to show us the same courtesy? We work hard too, don't we deserve some recognition?

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 11th, 2010, 3:37 pm
by Down the well
Netti wrote:Ah, but here's my question. They want us to be respectful to them by putting their name in the salutation. Why can't they take five seconds to show us the same courtesy? We work hard too, don't we deserve some recognition?
Because some of these agents get up to a hundred queries a day. I don't blame them for having to use a form.

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 11th, 2010, 5:30 pm
by Moni12
I'm with Netti on this one. I have only recieved two personal rejections and it felt so good because I felt like the agent was actually recognizing and respecting me as a writer. I understand they get a lot of queries, but I think they could at least put our names in the salutation of a form rejection especially since they stress about spelling the name right (I've heard cases where the misspelled a writer's name) or individually emailing a query to each agent instead of sending a mass email. Rejection feels a lot better and more encouraging when they at least include the writer's name.

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 11th, 2010, 6:25 pm
by Down the well
Moni12 wrote:Rejection feels a lot better and more encouraging when they at least include the writer's name.
Agreed, but it is what it is. And I think "Dear Author" responses will only get worse as more and more people attempt to write novels and query agents. For me, a worse feeling is getting no response at all, which unfortunately seems to be the new trend. The only thing we can control is the writing and the professionalism on our end. Anyway I thought this post had a lot of great advice straight from the agents on how to stand out in the slush pile -- in a good way.

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 13th, 2010, 1:18 am
by Heather B
Thanks, Down the well! That was heaps useful!
Whether we think agents should personalize or not, it doesn't change a thing - we need one. This blog just puts all the contradictions into one big basket for us to choose from.

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 13th, 2010, 12:04 pm
by Margo
Netti wrote:Ah, but here's my question. They want us to be respectful to them by putting their name in the salutation. Why can't they take five seconds to show us the same courtesy? We work hard too, don't we deserve some recognition?
Moni12 wrote:I understand they get a lot of queries, but I think they could at least put our names in the salutation of a form rejection especially since they stress about spelling the name right (I've heard cases where the misspelled a writer's name) or individually emailing a query to each agent instead of sending a mass email.

Let me put it in pure numbers. Did you send (and personalize) 10,000 queries last year? Working full-time, besides querying, do you think you could even if you wanted to?

If they send form rejections, we complain.

If they send no response, we complain.

If they reject at all, we complain.

I have even seen complaints that the agent doesn't use a no response policy to reject.

I know that rejection is hard. I know we seek out the little encouragements to keep us going. But once the writing is over, it's about business. In what other business relationship would we complain about not having our emotional needs attended to?

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 13th, 2010, 12:14 pm
by Margo
Watcher55 wrote:This one made me say: NO WAY!
Yeah, I was creeped out by that one, too.

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 13th, 2010, 5:20 pm
by Down the well
Heather B wrote:Thanks, Down the well! That was heaps useful!
Whether we think agents should personalize or not, it doesn't change a thing - we need one. This blog just puts all the contradictions into one big basket for us to choose from.
Girl, where have you been? Glad you found it helpful. :)

Margo wrote:If they reject at all, we complain.
Yeah, I wish they'd stop doing that. :P

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 14th, 2010, 3:18 am
by Heather B
Down the well wrote:
Girl, where have you been? Glad you found it helpful. :)

Margo wrote:If they reject at all, we complain.
Yeah, I wish they'd stop doing that. :P

I've had no internet, I feel reborn.

And yeah, it is a bad habit they've developed...

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 14th, 2010, 12:37 pm
by Margo
Down the well wrote:
Margo wrote:If they reject at all, we complain.
Yeah, I wish they'd stop doing that. :P
My only major complaint is that Nathan has started nailing his office furniture to the floor to hinder our fab parties while he's gone. Oooh, just occured to me that we need to locate his new office (figuratively, people! no stalking!). Officewarming party, anyone???

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 15th, 2010, 2:43 pm
by Guardian
Thanks. This is a very useful article. I'm going to incorporate every little stuff into the next query after I'm done with the final rewrite.

Thanks for posting it.

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: December 26th, 2010, 8:06 am
by Bron
I'm about to start querying and I've bookmarked that post. Thanks for pointing it out to us!

Re: Must Read For Those About To Query

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 12:14 pm
by Leila
Margo wrote:
Watcher55 wrote:This one made me say: NO WAY!
Yeah, I was creeped out by that one, too.
Me too!