Need Critique on my resubmit for showing rather than telling
Posted: September 24th, 2013, 9:53 pm
I am completely at a loss. I got a resubmit email from a publisher today. They said my crime fiction novel was very intriguing. They said their was too much telling for their liking so I needed to edit and resubmit. I can spot telling in somebody else's novel but not so much my own. I live in Indiana near Purdue. You'd think being near a major university I could find a writing group. When I lived in St. Louis and Minneapolis, finding a group was easy. Not here. HELP!