Short Story / 600 words

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Short Story / 600 words

Post by mnaylor3 » March 29th, 2011, 11:01 am

When 8th grader Sandra loses her solo part right before the National Choir competition to a 6th grader, Sandra schemes to get it back.

I think it has problems, but I can't see where. This is officially draft #3. Does anyone have the time to give me feedback on this shortie?

I can critique in exchange. PM with your email.

Thanks a million.

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