When 8th grader Sandra loses her solo part right before the National Choir competition to a 6th grader, Sandra schemes to get it back.
I think it has problems, but I can't see where. This is officially draft #3. Does anyone have the time to give me feedback on this shortie?
I can critique in exchange. PM with your email.
Thanks a million.
Critique partners are worth their weight in gold. So (checking financial page) like $20,000 a pound.
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