Looking for a critique partner for my story

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Pal678
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Looking for a critique partner for my story

Post by Pal678 » March 29th, 2021, 6:48 am

Soldiers Emma and Jackson fighting side by side against their common enemies which are themselves. Emma was closed in his room fighting addiction , Jackson just experienced breakup with his girlfriend. They both understand the other side of life where roses were rotten and fields are filled with deserts and snow not plants to yield the soil. Stars and galaxies embedded on a black canvas to make an organism called universe , a star is needed in their life filled with emptiness of dark matter. Like a particle under confusion, their mind can't resolve the paradox called life. Over the battle field of addiction and depression, there came a person in both of their lives a little child of a cat abandoned in street, first Jackson put an eye upon it then all of a sudden the baby cat moved towards Emma who used to stand her back away from it , Jackson followed the cat , Emma saw someone behind standing and a baby cat curdling at her feet, She turned around, they met eye to eye with the cat at their feet under the pink sunlight of their dreams the broken strings still attached for a second , the cat got adopted , opposite particles fused together to form a molecule called love , because they no longer believed in breakup.

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