Looking for Beta Reader and Critique Partner for 127K YA Urban Fantasy/Supernatural/Romance

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Bort Patgia
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Looking for Beta Reader and Critique Partner for 127K YA Urban Fantasy/Supernatural/Romance

Post by Bort Patgia » June 16th, 2022, 7:43 am

Hi, I'm looking for beta reader and critique partner to harshly judge my novel in a constructive way as possible. The setting is in a small town Maryvale that focuses on the world of supernatural and self-discovery of the main protagonist about his true heritage and the witch who's in her path to revenge.

Blurb: Fiery, Dangerous, and Defiant world of supernatural. Dark forces entails their future. In the year 2023, the supernatural existence became the hotspot of topics among the citizens in Maryvale. One in particular, Kate saw the danger in it first hand. When a mysterious boy name Van came to her world, they connect and found his true heritage. The discovery led Van Koelson found himself lost in the world of supernatural world. Kate helped him in his discovery of his power and together with Van, they faced the supernatural forces embodied as monsters. Will they rise above the darkness or will they become something sinister?

Synopsis: A supernatural encounter between two mortals; a conflicted man who does not know where to stand and a woman who can't outrun her past. Van is your regular teenage boy until the seventeen-year-old awakes with the discovery of unnatural occurrences, but it comes with a price; the rage, the outburst and the rebellious outlook make his father, Mick, to send him along his brother Tim to Maryvale city to start a new life. But little did he know, his life is going to be changed forever, for better and for worse.
In that city, he would found himself in difficult situation than before, supernatural existence became the hotspot of topics among the citizens in Maryvale. The bizarre murders took toll over the sense of security in Maryvale. And not too long his true nature emerged and fought monsters.
In his journey to know his true heritage, he met a girl, Kate who's a witch, she helped him know what he is and in turn the two found a common ground in discovering the existence of the supernatural. Her parents were murdered, leaving her with Mia, her younger sister. The tragedy would brought an immense desire of revenge. Living in the world of abundance, Kate, Laswell and Gilt would fend the supernatural forces and help Van in his journey to know his true nature, a Hunter.
Dark forces lurks ahead, The Ordinus, they had sent monsters throughout the city and was involved with many crimes and deaths all over the city. Together, they sought to know the truth. New secrets emerged as they forged their path challenging the darkness.

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