First Page of "Beyond the Paradise"

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Re: First Page of "Beyond the Paradise"

Post by bforlenza » October 18th, 2011, 10:05 pm

Thanks so much for your input. Will definitely look over your suggestions. As we all know what the agents want is a gamble and you never know but will keep moving on.

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