My Query for The Elements (Book I)
Posted: February 11th, 2013, 3:05 pm
Thanks so much. I think you're right. I do need to space it but didn't because I was trying to fit it all on one page, of course lol. I'm going to start over I think instead of just editing this one. I appreciate your feedback!boatbuilder wrote:Great concept but the query is somewhat wordy . Try to streamline it to around 250 words. It is also confusing because you have too many names in the text.
Using double spaces between your paragraphs will make it a little easier to read