Revised Query for THE FINAL CLUE

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Cher
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Re: Revised Query for THE FINAL CLUE

Post by Cher » September 10th, 2012, 10:34 am

Hello Kelsey,
Thank you very much for your critique. Your help is greatly appreciated.
Cheryl

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Re: Revised Query for THE FINAL CLUE. Tried a different approach

Post by Cher » October 5th, 2012, 3:00 pm

Hi All, would appreciate your thoughts and critique with this newest attempt. As always, I appreciate your help.
Thanks,
Cheryl

Dear Agent,

FBI agent Gina Russo wants to slam the person who's threatening her life into a wall spiked with nails. But there’s a problem: she doesn't know who the bastard is.

Joey Zicara, a top-notch agent who loves a challenge, is assigned as Gina’s partner when poems containing enigmatic clues signed by a Mr. WNM, arrive at her front door. WNM seems to know everything from the scent of her perfume to the heartbreak of her life that still stings like hell. Joey’s intrigued with her beauty, but finds she’s as difficult to deal with as the cryptic poems.

Gina is counting on her experience as an agent and the cautious heart of a woman scorned to dodge not only WNM who wants her life, but also her partner who has captivating dimples and makes her heart want to feel again. But will she be able to?


THE FINAL CLUE: A Character-driven suspense novel with a touch of romance complete at 100,000 words.

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