Re: Query - Moonlight Falters (new version at post 16)
Posted: June 14th, 2011, 3:20 pm
First of all, thank you again for your very useful comments Quill and michelliemason. I spent several days thinking about my query and I think I included way too much information in the previous versions without getting to the heart of the matter, which led to many of your comments and confusion. So, here is a brand new version that's a bit shorter and more straightforward, I think.
Widowed attorney Adam Wesley believes his pretty new neighbor when she introduces herself as Leah Jones, a photographer on assignment to shoot scenes of small-town Georgia. He does not know that Leah lies.
Despite Adam's kind blue eyes, Leah refuses to let him distract her from the search for her missing brother. She believes that she is the last female Traveler, a member of a group of advanced humans who can teleport across borders, learn languages in hours, and alter appearances at will. She has never known the whole truth.
Descendants of the Biblical King Solomon kidnap the pair on the date with Adam that Leah wished she had resisted. They brand Leah as a mythical Jinn, a supernatural being rooted in the Q'uran, and subject to their servitude. They do not know who they are dealing with.
MOONLIGHT FALTERS tracks Adam’s and Leah’s week-long relationship as they connect Adam’s newest lawsuit, Leah’s brother's disappearance, and the Sons of Solomons’ quest for domination to one central question: what is Leah Jones? Told from Adam’s and Leah’s dual perspectives, it is a contemporary fantasy with legal mystery elements, in the vein of Danny Tobey’s The Faculty Club. Though written to stand alone, I believe it has strong series potential.
Widowed attorney Adam Wesley believes his pretty new neighbor when she introduces herself as Leah Jones, a photographer on assignment to shoot scenes of small-town Georgia. He does not know that Leah lies.
Despite Adam's kind blue eyes, Leah refuses to let him distract her from the search for her missing brother. She believes that she is the last female Traveler, a member of a group of advanced humans who can teleport across borders, learn languages in hours, and alter appearances at will. She has never known the whole truth.
Descendants of the Biblical King Solomon kidnap the pair on the date with Adam that Leah wished she had resisted. They brand Leah as a mythical Jinn, a supernatural being rooted in the Q'uran, and subject to their servitude. They do not know who they are dealing with.
MOONLIGHT FALTERS tracks Adam’s and Leah’s week-long relationship as they connect Adam’s newest lawsuit, Leah’s brother's disappearance, and the Sons of Solomons’ quest for domination to one central question: what is Leah Jones? Told from Adam’s and Leah’s dual perspectives, it is a contemporary fantasy with legal mystery elements, in the vein of Danny Tobey’s The Faculty Club. Though written to stand alone, I believe it has strong series potential.