Query Critique - Zombie Queen

[Lunetta22]

I don't have anything to add ot the crits, but I think that this sounds like a lot of fun! I love Mr. Sort-of Dead. Hahaha! I would absolutely read this.

[ebradmon]

(Bouncing up and down and clamping) Hey, thank you Tara Queries and Lunetta22! I’d disappeared from the grid to go off and stew on how to make the suggested changes. Both of you just totally made my day and gave me back heart! (Like maybe I should get off my butt and actually send out a real query or something…) Again thank you!