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Post by AdrianTheAuthor » March 26th, 2022, 10:18 am

Hi everyone

Thank you so much for the critiques. I am delighted to announce that The Groundworld Heroes will be published by Monarch Press is August 2024!

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Re: Query: The Groundworld Heroes

Post by bernhard6804 » August 30th, 2022, 9:00 am

hello adrian
just an opinion.
Set the query in present tense. (more immediate)
Don't give away the whole book. (spoiler alert)
short intro molepeople (make the reader interested in who these folk are without giving it all away)
Intro the hero in one or two captivating sentences (make the reader want to find out why he is digging)
then give the reader the stakes (what's at risk)
read some successful queries & check out 'pitchwars' (it helped me tremendously to read what works)
hope this helps a bit
good luck bernhard

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