Query: Bring Me Back, women's fiction--Updated 9/23

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karenbb
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Re: Query: Bring Me Back, women's fiction--Updated 9/23

Post by karenbb » September 23rd, 2010, 12:42 pm

fishfood, thanks so much for your own take on my query--I hope it was fun! I think it's much more enjoyable to work on someone else's query.

quill, thank you , again, for your input. I was astounded that you had so few comments (and I don't think they're nitpicky, we have to be nitpicky at this point).

thanks, thanks, thanks!

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Re: Query: Bring Me Back, women's fiction--Updated 9/23

Post by fishfood » September 23rd, 2010, 4:35 pm

It is much more fun--and easier to write someone else's query. ;)

Let us know if you get any requests. Good luck!

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Re: Query: Bring Me Back, women's fiction--Updated 9/23

Post by pollymilton » September 30th, 2010, 8:18 pm

I'm busily avoiding making dinner, so let me say that I really like your last version. And how cool to see it change over time. I bet this will hit!
Polly

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