Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Hi,

I think I would cut down on listing all the names of the characters, especially each time you mention them. For a short query, it comes off as a bit redundant...

Thanks in advance for your help! Dear Mr. x, When Jessie, my wife, raced down the stairs while gasping for air, my heart sank like a heavy stone. "Scott, Ashley's missing, they don't know..." Ashley, our only daughter, is seventeen-years old and her worthless boyfriend just called 911 to r...