Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Wow, very creative. Different take of zombies. I have a question about the title though. Is the zombie queen the main issue? The main topic of the novel? All and all, i wish you the best of luck. I hope this helped. I’m polishing up the old WIP and thought it might be high time to start on the dread...

Okay, more details on the way. Dear [Agent's name]: What the world doesn’t give you, the world can’t take away. It all has to do with faith. Use Somebody is an inspirational romance and is approximately 156,000 words. Seven year olds are typically found playing with their friends, swimming, riding b...

If I've revised a query that I've already sent out, should I wait for a reply from the agent before I resend the query? Should I resend even after rejection?

Take two: here is a revised version. Dear [Agent's name]: What the world doesn’t give you, the world can’t take away. It all has to do with faith. Use Somebody is an inspirational romance for 16 and up. It is approximately 156,000 words. Seventeen year old Drakel Davis is the mastermind of the bigge...

Any comments about personalized sentences? Can i do without them?

You hit dead on with a concern of mine: rhetorical questions. This is exactly what i needed. Thank you

Great title and wise choice of genre. Your book is not exactly like it, of course, but the Neverending Story came to my mind. I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR COMMENTS: At some point every boy has to face the question: has he outgrown monster stories? Must he put away his velociraptors, his transformers, his ...

*See third page for revised version* I've sat down and created my manuscript. I've revised it more than once. I got all excited, sent out the query, and got rejected. Now that that's out of my system (not entirely, but good enough), I'm ready to get back to it. It's all about perseverance, right? I ...