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Newest version, after Nathan's Page critique monday. And tried to clear up the "Someone else can do it too" line. And the reason for the MC being in the school is explained on page two. Wandering around at night is how he experiments with his powers. Hide. I obeyed the voice in my head wi...

An update on my work and my life: http://williammjones.blogspot.com/2010/ ... 81410.html

Business offer?
Help wanted letter?

Oh, I think I know something that might help. I wrote a blog post on it a few weeks ago: http://williammjones.blogspot.com/2010/07/editing-tools.html In the post I mentioned a text to speech program called Natural Reader. You put your text into it, and it reads it back to you. It can even turn the t...

From my brother: You finished that book months ago, why are you still working on it? (Uh, it's called editing.)

I'm cheating and posting my first two sentances, because my first is only one word.

Hide. I obeyed the voice in my head without question.

Oh, sounds fun. Gunmetal Grey: I would probabally pick it up and look at a page or two. It's short, simple, and sounds like a fun read. When the stormbirds fly: I like the sound of the title, but probabally wouldn't look past the back cover, mainly because I don't read Historical Romance. Here's min...

An escerpt from my WIP: http://williammjones.blogspot.com/2010/ ... so-im.html

I forgot to title the blog post at first, and I'm kind of amused at the address it was assigned.

I don't know which versions of windows has it, but I know my laptop comes with a program called "windows speech recognition". It trains itself to listen to a specific users voice, and allows speech to text, as well as controlling everything else on your computer. Plus it's free. It's prett...

Form rejection, and I probably wouldn't read the pages. No offense, the query was just a little vague.

(Sorry, My mistake.)

How Villains should be three dimensional characters with backgrounds and motives. And a link to a list all evil overlords should keep tapped to the fridge.

http://williammjones.blogspot.com/2010/07/villians.html

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My unproffesional views on developing realistic character: http://williammjones.blogspot.com/2010/ ... cters.html

I can't really judge the title from an unbiased viewpoint because I really like it. In the book one of the half Fey characters quotes Emily Dickinson's poem: I'm Nobody. She likes the poem because her name is also Emily, and because she considers Half Fey to be Nobodies. The humans (She calls them S...

Newest Draft My main question now is: does this query give some clue to the unique elements of the story? Is there still anything that seems cliche or overdone? Dear (Agent name): Dominic Taylor is able to do strange things, such as opening locked doors and passing by security cameras undetected. H...