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by longknife
March 6th, 2015, 2:01 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 452902

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Follow the Raven 114,000 words Fantasy/Science Fiction The flock of sheep struggles to find grass on the hillside. They scratch away the dreary ash to reach the vegetation struggling through it. Eigan watches and wishes there was something he could do for them. He notes the grasses on the bank of th...
by longknife
March 6th, 2015, 1:53 pm
Forum: Self-Publishing
Topic: Publishing Without Amazon
Replies: 5
Views: 4367

Re: Publishing Without Amazon

Maybe I scanned it too fast.

You only do hard copy publishing with direct distribution to book stores? Where and how many?

No e-books?

Are authors expected to pay up-front money in order to get published?
by longknife
March 2nd, 2015, 11:44 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: Seeking Feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 3436

Seeking Feedback

A young boy flees because he carries the keys to destroying the plans of a triad of gods. His companions include a dog he learns he can talk to, a wizened old wizard who's lost most of his powers, a dwarf, and a young girl who ends up fighting mythical beings at his side, His quest is to loose the b...
by longknife
March 1st, 2015, 2:34 pm
Forum: Self-Publishing
Topic: The Top 10 Things All Authors Should Know About Amazon
Replies: 2
Views: 3876

The Top 10 Things All Authors Should Know About Amazon

The first one caught me by surprise – Your Amazon rating has nothing to do with sales. Really? Reading it was an inspiration. Amazon reviews carry weight. CreateSpace uses Ingram's services – I didn't even know anything about Ingram. And it IS a service you have to pay for! Claim your book via Autho...
by longknife
March 1st, 2015, 2:34 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Transitional Words and Phrases
Replies: 5
Views: 13666

Re: Transitional Words and Phrases

Sigh. I don't know - maybe it's just me. I get an idea, it germinates, and I sit down to write. Usually after a good start, I set about establishing my characters so they tend to draw the narrative forward. I have one WIP that is really getting to me. As it's historical fiction, I'm constrained in c...
by longknife
February 28th, 2015, 8:40 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Transitional Words and Phrases
Replies: 5
Views: 13666

Re: Transitional Words and Phrases

Thanks for an informative post - as usual. I think the key word is "formal" which may not always relate to prose. I realize a lot of words tends to be over used and I also noted comments about what words tend to start sentences. It's interesting what all the little tricks are that turn a d...
by longknife
February 26th, 2015, 8:40 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Transitional Words and Phrases
Replies: 5
Views: 13666

Transitional Words and Phrases

I need some help. In reviewing/revising/editing a novel, I am using a grammar analytical program which consistently tells me I am not using enough transitional words and phrases. I understand what they are but wonder why they are considered so important. I like to keep my sentences short and simple,...
by longknife
February 20th, 2015, 3:09 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Word Frequency Count Software
Replies: 4
Views: 5277

Word Frequency Count Software

I don't remember what it was or where I found it but in my old PC I had a free program that counted the frequency of words in a document.
My LibreOffice comes with a character and word count but not the frequency feature.
Any suggestions?
by longknife
February 17th, 2015, 2:42 pm
Forum: Self-Publishing
Topic: seeking advice
Replies: 6
Views: 4593

Re: seeking advice

The problem with Lulu for self-publishing is the lack of a wide base for sale.

CreateSpace is actually part of Amazon.com so when you publish your work there, it appears on the Amazon.com site. Be aware that before your work can be put up for sale, you have to buy the proof copy.
by longknife
February 16th, 2015, 1:53 pm
Forum: Self-Publishing
Topic: What're the challenges facing in the Self-Publisher's world?
Replies: 5
Views: 5479

Re: What're the challenges facing in the Self-Publisher's world?

Marketing your works!!!! Established publishers pay smaller royalties because the put a lot of $$$$ in publicizing/marketing their products. They also have established distribution points. Let's say you self-publish on Kindle or CreateSpace paperback for Amazon.com. Where are you going to get the mo...
by longknife
February 14th, 2015, 7:26 pm
Forum: Self-Publishing
Topic: Short Story for All Ages
Replies: 0
Views: 1994

Short Story for All Ages

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A harbor seal escapes from a cruel owner.
by longknife
February 9th, 2015, 1:56 pm
Forum: Self-Publishing
Topic: Custom covers for 3 bucks (seriously)
Replies: 2
Views: 2509

Re: Custom covers for 3 bucks (seriously)

Looks legit. I only have to find a photo I can use.
by longknife
January 26th, 2015, 1:19 pm
Forum: Social Media and Book Promotion
Topic: Do you have a new blog post?
Replies: 2655
Views: 820997

Re: Do you have a new blog post?

I had an epiphany! Someone read my latest short story and told me it was passive, dull, and boring!

Ouch.

See what I did about it at A Soldiers Stories @ http://lvcabbie.blogspot.com
by longknife
January 25th, 2015, 12:35 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Writing Thesaraus'
Replies: 0
Views: 2315

Writing Thesaraus'

A superb resource site for writers of fiction and non-fiction. I've been following it for years, lost it, and just found it again.

Writers Helping Writers http://writershelpingwriters.net/thesaurus-collections/
by longknife
January 24th, 2015, 2:01 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: El Rancho Jamul
Replies: 0
Views: 4788

El Rancho Jamul

First few paragraphs of short story. Got a lot of work to do - it's 28,500 words A faint mist blurred an expanse of water stretching from north to south. Gabriel Fletcher had never seen the like. Since leaving the craggy, green hills of eastern Tennessee, he'd encountered swamps, huge rivers, endles...