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- October 13th, 2010, 4:43 pm
- Forum: Finding An Agent
- Topic: Rejection Stats
- Replies: 227
- Views: 149902
Re: Rejection Stats
Genre: YA Paranormal Romance Queries sent: 9 Rejections: 3 No reply: 5 Requests for partials: 0 Requests for full: 0 Funny, how whenever i got my non-personalized rejections i was happy. a part of my brain said- phew, this isnt just a story sitting in my laptop anymore. another said- one less agent ...
- October 12th, 2010, 5:58 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: AMETHYST - YA Paranormal Romance/Fantasy - Query
- Replies: 18
- Views: 5959
Re: AMETHYST - YA Paranormal Romance/Fantasy - Query
If seventeen-year-old Sharlet Gales had known she was dating the son of the devil, she might have reconsidered. PERFECT BEGINNING- COULDNT HAVE GOTTEN BETTER! After being stalked by him for weeks, Sharlet finally meets Kalav Devilson when she threatens to kill him with the tip of her mascara pen HIL...
- October 12th, 2010, 9:56 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Speculative Sci/Fan Query - FREE TO FORGIVE
- Replies: 12
- Views: 4822
Re: Speculative Sci/Fan Query - FREE TO FORGIVE
Dear (insert wonderful agent of awesomeness), Yora Garver's three best friends aren't human; they're Artificial Living Organisms: a race of intelligent, genetically engineered and fully customizable pets WONDERFUL BEGINNING. But when her parents' sudden arrest puts her ALOs' lives in danger AGAIN- W...
- October 11th, 2010, 12:04 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: HALEY - Suburban Gothic Novel
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5311
Re: HALEY - Suburban Gothic Novel
Hi Severus. My suggestions are in capital letters, inserted in your letter. Dear Agent, Sixteen year-old Alex Montoya dislikes children. In fact, he downright hates them COMBINE THE FIRST TWO SENTENCES- 16 YEAR OLD ALEX MONTOYA HATES CHILDREN. But other than babysitting, he's run out of options to m...
- October 10th, 2010, 10:13 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Fantasy query- The Beacon.
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3545
Re: Fantasy query- The Beacon.
Dear Agent’s Name, Deccaura lives a carefree life, exploring her father’s groves in Balla and learning archery with the charming and exotic Piorri. Despite the animosity between their races, Deccaura’s adoration for the low- caste Piorri grows ARE WE TALKING OF THIS TIME? THE MENTION OF LOW CASTE MA...
- October 10th, 2010, 10:04 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Queen of Heaven - YA Fantasy Query
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5962
Re: Queen of Heaven - YA Fantasy Query
I know I've already posted a query but I like writing them and I have a lot of stuff written. Thanks in advance and rip it apart. I can take it :D - Thirteen year old Jin wants to conquer the world PERFECT BEGINNING!. She just needs an army. Jin was banished from her homeland after finding out the...
- October 9th, 2010, 5:21 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: First Light query. YA Fantasy
- Replies: 18
- Views: 6354
Re: First Light query {revison 4}. YA Fantasy
Dear {agent}, If not remembering your past is bad then Ashalei Callister’s life is about to become hell. Confused about flashbacks she’s been getting that seem like memories, but are from another era; where girls wore corsets and long gowns with their hair done up magnificently. She remembers fight...
- October 9th, 2010, 3:58 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Queries that got a positive response
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1345
Re: Queries that got a positive response
Maybe its best to keep it at positive response- e.i both request and offer!
- October 8th, 2010, 5:29 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 213
- Views: 184679
Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Dear Mr. Bransford, Agora Beckwith can't congratulate herself for being a superhuman- there are just too many like her out there. She can only hide in the shadows and hope that her destiny will lead her to save lives and serve the ultimate purpose of her creation. Being a fire protector doesn't come...
- October 8th, 2010, 5:20 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: QUERY- YA Mystery- Mad as a Hatter
- Replies: 30
- Views: 9837
Re: QUERY- YA Mystery- Mad as a Hatter
this query is worth sending off immediately!
- October 8th, 2010, 5:15 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Queries that got a positive response
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1345
Queries that got a positive response
The title is self explanatory. Wouldnt it be a good idea to post those queries that caught an agent's eye and led to either a pages or full manuscript request? I am sure we can pick a few pointers out of those!
- October 8th, 2010, 5:12 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: The Whip-Slip query
- Replies: 68
- Views: 20257
Re: The Whip-Slip query
Thanks for everyone's comments! The query has been reworked to something I'm pleased with. I actually had an agent contact me this morning asking for pages - she'd seen my query posted on the AW forums and was intrigued. Could not have gotten there without the help on here, so thanks again! congrats!
- October 8th, 2010, 5:10 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: AMETHYST - YA Paranormal Romance/Fantasy - Query
- Replies: 18
- Views: 5959
Re: AMETHYST - YA Paranormal Romance/Fantasy - Query
I aint a pro at this art, but here are my small suggestions, in capital letters, inserted in your paragraph: He comes from a place where the walls are painted with innocent screams by the people who murdered them VIVID, BUT A BIT TOO HEAVY TO BEGIN WITH—and Sharlet Gales? Well, she loves him IN THE ...
- October 8th, 2010, 4:56 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: A Lullaby- YA paranormal romance query
- Replies: 28
- Views: 9809
Re: A Lullaby- YA paranormal romance query
Natasha and android, thank you!
There is a smile on my face for the first time- and its getting wider.
android:
how about I end it like:
When Dave and Agora face the punishment of an untimely end, they have to make a choice- separation and forgiveness or an impending road to doom.
There is a smile on my face for the first time- and its getting wider.
android:
how about I end it like:
When Dave and Agora face the punishment of an untimely end, they have to make a choice- separation and forgiveness or an impending road to doom.
- October 8th, 2010, 11:18 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: A Lullaby- YA paranormal romance query
- Replies: 28
- Views: 9809
Re: A Lullaby- YA paranormal romance query
version 4 Agora Beckwith can't congratulate herself for being a superhuman- there are just too many out there like her. She can only hide in the shadows and hope that her destiny will lead her to save lives and serve the ultimate purpose of her creation. Being a fire protector doesn't come with many...