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by Nathan Bransford
November 13th, 2023, 1:50 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 11/16/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7041

Page critique 11/16/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
November 6th, 2023, 3:20 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 11/9/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7199

Query critique 11/9/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
October 30th, 2023, 2:18 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 11/2/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6975

Page critique 11/2/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
October 23rd, 2023, 3:46 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 10/26/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6647

Query critique 10/26/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
October 16th, 2023, 3:06 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 10/19/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6417

Page critique 10/19/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
October 10th, 2023, 4:17 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 10/12/23
Replies: 1
Views: 5666

Query critique 10/12/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
October 2nd, 2023, 1:52 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 10/5/23
Replies: 0
Views: 8049

Page critique 10/5/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
September 25th, 2023, 2:50 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 9/28/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7908

Query critique 9/28/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
September 18th, 2023, 3:02 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 9/21/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7408

Page critique 9/21/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
September 11th, 2023, 4:18 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 9/14/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6830

Query critique 9/14/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
September 4th, 2023, 4:39 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 9/7/23
Replies: 1
Views: 5289

Page critique 9/7/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
August 14th, 2023, 3:19 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 8/17/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6077

Query critique 8/17/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
August 7th, 2023, 2:48 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 8/10/23
Replies: 0
Views: 5738

Page critique 8/10/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
July 25th, 2023, 1:52 pm
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Elevator Pitch
Replies: 1
Views: 3039

Re: Elevator Pitch

Here's my advice on queries with multiple protagonists: https://nathanbransford.com/blog/2019/0 ... ery-letter

And here's my advice on one sentence pitches: https://nathanbransford.com/blog/2010/0 ... ence-pitch