Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I like it. The atmosphere is definitely there and the story is interesting. It leaves me wanting to know more. I like the juxtapose of family/holiday/warmth with tension. I do wonder if the tension could be brought in a bit smoother, it seems like almost an afterthought loaded on top of the warmth ...

Now I am talking kid shows only. pick 1 cartoon and 1 non-cartoon I think I would have to say in no particular order: 1) Tom and Jerry - Violent violent violent 2) The Muppets - The Swedish chef chasing the chicken with a butcher knife or making donuts by throwing dough in the air and shooting a hol...

I had to laugh because I have the same thing in my manuscript. Something to the effect of... "He held her tight in his arms" I'm not a expert but I think tight or tightly is correct either way and is still a adverb either ways. But just wait... an expert will come by and slap me for being ...

Okay, here's the deal. I wrote a story for the wife. Had it professionally edited, and all the goodies. I still want to go through the traditional means of publishing, however my wife wants a copy now, and not a manuscript. And we all know how slow the publishing industry works. It could be years, o...

I'm in agreement, "Nix" Lord of the flies from that list.

My daughter's loved the series with cats... er, going of memory here but I think its "warrior series" by Erin hunter?

Any comments would be appreciated. Thank you. Prologue Downy snowflakes the size of cotton balls fluttered from the heavens on that unforgettable December evening with the help of a light wind blowing in from the northwest. The air and snow swirled around like a soft exhale of an angel’s breath, coa...

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SYDNEY – An Australian publisher is reprinting 7,000 cookbooks over a recipe for pasta with "salt and freshly ground black people." Penguin Group Australia's head of publishing, Bob Sessions, acknowledged the proofreader for the Pasta Bible should have picked up the error, but called it no...

I have nightmares of being married with three daughters... Oh damn, that's reality.

I have a goofy one where I try pulling my gums out of my mouth with my finger and no matter how much I pull it all comes out like taffy!!! It's really freaky!

Married...with children

For cartoon I would have to go with Voltron

Awesome!!! Grats!

I like them... it makes the characters seem more realistic, and to me, that is what bonds you to certain characters. But you are correct if you use to many, then it becomes repetitious and annoying.

Christian Fiction has something like 27 or 28... and to make things worse, many of them work in the same agency!

double-spaced?

shadow wrote:YAHOO

Yahoo for me also!!