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- October 10th, 2010, 1:15 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help- FORSAKEN
- Replies: 40
- Views: 14662
Re: Query Help- FORSAKEN
Revision Alright, I am going to try this again. Hoping this might explain it a little better. :) Sixteen-year-old Anna is mourning the sudden death of her family. While other maidens her age are preparing to enter into courtships, she is left grasping for answers. Taking refuge in a nearby village ...
- October 10th, 2010, 1:04 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Queen of Heaven - YA Fantasy Query
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5962
Re: Queen of Heaven - YA Fantasy Query
I know I've already posted a query but I like writing them and I have a lot of stuff written. Thanks in advance and rip it apart. I can take it :D - Thirteen year old Jin wants to conquer the world. She just needs an army. I like this opening. Jin was banished from her homeland after finding out t...
- October 9th, 2010, 11:41 am
- Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
- Topic: Synopsis: Book of Shadows
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6443
Re: Synopsis: Book of Shadows
I think this draft is better. The only thing I might consider changing would be the use of bedtime in your last sententence. To me, it makes it sound like he is a little kid, but this might just be me. :-P
- October 7th, 2010, 12:02 am
- Forum: Finding An Agent
- Topic: Prologue & Synopsis Question
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4340
Re: Prologue & Synopsis Question
Cheekychook,
Thanks! I have noticed some agents are specific, while others are not, when it comes to the synopsis. I figured I would ask though, before I start to query those asking for one. Better safe than sorry. :)
Thanks! I have noticed some agents are specific, while others are not, when it comes to the synopsis. I figured I would ask though, before I start to query those asking for one. Better safe than sorry. :)
- October 6th, 2010, 4:37 pm
- Forum: Finding An Agent
- Topic: Prologue & Synopsis Question
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4340
Re: Prologue & Synopsis Question
So far as prologues being mocked and derided, I know it, it's just plain silly, and it's got to stop. I'm going to have a prologue in every one of my books. Two in some of them. I'm going to start a facebook page, "I Like Prologues, Can't Live Without 'Em." I'm going to call Oprah, Presid...
- October 6th, 2010, 4:06 pm
- Forum: Finding An Agent
- Topic: Prologue & Synopsis Question
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4340
Re: Prologue & Synopsis Question
Quill & Jessa,
Thanks for the input! I wasn't planning on the prologue, but it shows the catalyst to what occurs in chapter one.
Thanks for the input! I wasn't planning on the prologue, but it shows the catalyst to what occurs in chapter one.
- October 6th, 2010, 3:43 pm
- Forum: Finding An Agent
- Topic: Prologue & Synopsis Question
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4340
Prologue & Synopsis Question
I didn't see this already posted and if it is sorry for the repost. When an agent asks for 3 sample chapters does the prologue count as a chapter? Mine is only a page and a half and provides a hook that sets up the first chapter. I have read some people say yes it does count and others say if it is ...
- October 2nd, 2010, 11:51 pm
- Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
- Topic: Synopsis: Book of Shadows
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6443
Re: Synopsis: Book of Shadows
Alex Benson just lost his wife to suicide, but that’s the least of his worries. With his wife's death haunting his thoughts, he finds he can no longer live a normal life and ends up at an Apostolic Pentecostal church. But the gods If you are looking at this from his stand point wouldn't it be God n...
- September 30th, 2010, 10:31 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: The Thorn Tree - YA Paranormal
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4856
Re: The Thorn Tree - YA Paranormal
Hi everyone. Here's the query for THE THORN TREE, a 60,000 word YA Supernatural. I haven't bothered with the basic intro/closing parts. Please have at it! I have a thick skin. When Carolyn Lepworth’s parents die in a subway accident she moves in with her estranged grandmother in Rathcrannog, New Ha...
- September 30th, 2010, 6:11 pm
- Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
- Topic: Synopsis-Forsaken
- Replies: 11
- Views: 5674
Re: Synopsis-Forsaken
Arbraun thanks for the comments! I agree it is too long but wanted to hear suggestions before starting to cut it down :)
- September 29th, 2010, 3:45 pm
- Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
- Topic: Synopsis-Forsaken
- Replies: 11
- Views: 5674
Re: Synopsis-Forsaken
Thanks for the comments whip. This synopsis is my whole story with the ending. It is meant to be told in two parts but written to stand alone as well.
- September 24th, 2010, 4:01 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Forsaken Ones Query-Paranormal novel
- Replies: 10
- Views: 3692
Re: Forsaken Ones Query-Paranormal novel
This is my first post here, also the first query I've posted anywhere. And the first one I have ever written so feedback your be amazing! And I'll give you feedback on your query (not sure if I'm totally qualified to, but at least I can tell you is something doesn't make sense right?) Anyways, so h...
- September 20th, 2010, 9:50 am
- Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
- Topic: Synopsis: Jade's Hurricane
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3871
Re: Synopsis: Jade's Hurricane
I like your synopsis. There were only two things that struck me. 1: "He sends two of his minions to talk the girls into joining him, and as a result, Jade creates a hurricane worse then any before, an uncontrolled Titan who is going to swipe the Air Nation from the face of the earth." Why ...
- September 20th, 2010, 9:01 am
- Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
- Topic: Synopsis-Forsaken
- Replies: 11
- Views: 5674
Re: Synopsis-Forsaken
Clara,
Thanks for the advice.I knew it was running long just wasn't sure what exactly to cut.
Thanks for the advice.I knew it was running long just wasn't sure what exactly to cut.
- September 19th, 2010, 6:12 pm
- Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
- Topic: Synopsis-Forsaken
- Replies: 11
- Views: 5674
Synopsis-Forsaken
Thanks in advance for the advice :) Anna’s sixteenth birthday should have been a time celebrating her transition into adulthood, but instead it marks the brutal murder of her family members. With nowhere else to go, Anna heads into the small village of Litchfield to find family friends, Dermot and T...