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by BAL
February 23rd, 2010, 10:50 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: QUERY: A Measure of Disorder (YA Fantasy) REVISED AGAIN = )
Replies: 19
Views: 3204

Re: QUERY: A Measure of Disorder (YA Fantasy) REVISED AGAIN = )

First I want to thank you for your advice on my query letter it sounds a million times better now. So thank you. I love the premise of this story, it sounds great. unfortunately I'm still very new to this and don't have a lot of advice to offer. The only thing I would say is don't worry about the wo...
by BAL
February 22nd, 2010, 1:05 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: QUERY: SPIRIT HILL - Revision #3
Replies: 37
Views: 6157

Re: QUERY: SPIRIT HILL - Literary

I like the sound of this book a lot, unfortunately I'm not experienced enough to give advice but I can give encouragement. Keep it up. I would love to be able to pick this up and read it someday.
by BAL
February 22nd, 2010, 12:48 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: QUERY: Shameless Acts of Grieving, Mainstream
Replies: 6
Views: 1288

Re: QUERY: Shameless Acts of Grieving, Mainstream

First off thanks for your comments to my query and second I like the sound of your book it sounds intriguing. I agree with most but not all of the comments. I wish I could add more advice but I'm very new at this myself and your query is way better then mine to begin with. Good luck though and keep ...
by BAL
February 22nd, 2010, 12:36 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Too Enchanted *getting closer*
Replies: 19
Views: 3595

Re: Query: Too Enchanted

Thanks to snlemon, lachrymal, and jessicatudor for your advice and encouragement. Here it is again with the suggested changes. Hopefully I’ve got it closer this time. Thanks to anyone who comments. It’s much appreciated. Dear Agent, Tirian is an enchanted toad with magical powers living in the fore...
by BAL
February 15th, 2010, 2:45 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Too Enchanted *getting closer*
Replies: 19
Views: 3595

Re: Query: Too Enchanted

Thanks to everyone who has commented. The most recent query is at the bottom of the page. *just to keep you updated I have changed the name of my main character* Let me know what you think. Thank you. Dear Agent, Tirian is an enchanted toad with magical powers living in the forest kingdom of Garn. B...
by BAL
February 12th, 2010, 12:20 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Too Enchanted *getting closer*
Replies: 19
Views: 3595

Re: Query: Too Enchanted

Thank you Wallflower for your advice, here is a more detailed query letter. Dear agent, My 94,000-word novel, Too Enchanted, is a fantasy adventure story filled with humor, action, romance and colorful characters. The enchanted forest of Garn is in an uproar. For the first time in over a hundred yea...
by BAL
February 12th, 2010, 11:15 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Too Enchanted *getting closer*
Replies: 19
Views: 3595

Query: Too Enchanted *getting closer*

*Scroll to the bottom to see my latest query post* Any advice on this would be very welcome and I'll return the favor. Dear Agent, Brand is an enchanted toad living in the forest kingdom of Garn. But when Brand is turned into a human he must leave the quiet safety of his forest home and go to the h...