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by Tycoon
March 12th, 2010, 2:07 am
Forum: Finding An Agent
Topic: Request for a Full MS - It came...the rejection.
Replies: 57
Views: 7512

Re: Request for a Full MS - It came...the rejection.

I think Ghosts advice is solid "READ IT OUT LOUD"

I have my wife listen to me... she likes it when I read to her!
by Tycoon
March 12th, 2010, 2:06 am
Forum: Finding An Agent
Topic: First request for a full MS... rejected
Replies: 22
Views: 3005

Re: First request for a full MS! YES!

Grats and Good luck!
by Tycoon
February 25th, 2010, 5:37 pm
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: How old are you?
Replies: 113
Views: 22250

Re: How old are you?

35 and more silver hair than I know what to do with.
by Tycoon
February 20th, 2010, 11:33 pm
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: Synopsis - The Butterfly Key
Replies: 4
Views: 1199

Re: Synopsis - The Butterfly Key

Ghost in the Machine wrote:Hi Tycoon,

I worked on the synopsis and sent it back via a PM, twice. My outbox is reading 0, so I'm confused. Did you get it? If not I'll try again. What can I say? The Ghost is blond.
Nope... as of yet I have not received it... ill keep looking though!
by Tycoon
February 19th, 2010, 8:44 pm
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: Synopsis - The Butterfly Key
Replies: 4
Views: 1199

Re: Synopsis - The Butterfly Key

Ghost in the Machine wrote:Hi Tycoon,

Do you have enough cutlery left after our query-fest to hurl back at me? If so, count me in.

Ghost in the Machine
Thanks ghost.... I sent you a PM
by Tycoon
February 19th, 2010, 11:00 am
Forum: Finding An Agent
Topic: Request for a Full MS - It came...the rejection.
Replies: 57
Views: 7512

Re: OMG!!! Request for a Full MS!!!!

Woot Woot Woot!!!

Grats!
by Tycoon
February 19th, 2010, 10:58 am
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: You know you've been up too late working on your book when..
Replies: 20
Views: 3305

Re: You know you've been up too late working on your book when..

Work calls and asks you, "WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU?!?!"
by Tycoon
February 19th, 2010, 10:56 am
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: You Might Be Addicted to the Bransforums If...
Replies: 11
Views: 1823

Re: You Might Be Addicted to the Bransforums If...

When you keep hitting the refresh button to see if anyone has replied to your post!!!!
by Tycoon
February 18th, 2010, 2:58 pm
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: Synopsis - The Butterfly Key
Replies: 4
Views: 1199

Synopsis - The Butterfly Key

Hello everyone, After a 2 week sabbatical from all things computer, I am back refreshed and ready to try and help others. Currently I am looking for 3 to 5 volunteers who helped me with my query to go over my synopsis and make it tight. If your interested just leave me a message here or PM me... Tha...
by Tycoon
February 10th, 2010, 4:25 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - The Butterfly Key- revision now on page 6
Replies: 56
Views: 6785

Re: Query - The Butterfly Key- revision now on page 6

Ghost in the Machine wrote:Hi Tycoon,

Just a few more tweaks . . . NOT! Stick a fork in me, I'm done. You are good to go.

Congrats - Ghost
I got a whole-lot-o-forks for you!!!

Thx for the help!
by Tycoon
February 9th, 2010, 4:46 am
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: Congratulations Ink!
Replies: 26
Views: 4149

Re: Congratulations Ink!

Woot!!! grats... My wife and I are trying for our 4th... I have all girls so a boy would be nice for me!!!
by Tycoon
February 9th, 2010, 4:32 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - The Butterfly Key- revision now on page 6
Replies: 56
Views: 6785

Re: Query - The Butterfly Key- revision now on page 6

Hi Tycoon, I haven't read any of your other revisions of this query, so I'm coming to it fresh. It read well to me. I don't think you need the first sentence though. The information in it is mostly conveyed in the next two sentences. Just add his last name to the second sentence and maybe the fact ...
by Tycoon
February 9th, 2010, 2:26 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - The Butterfly Key- revision now on page 6
Replies: 56
Views: 6785

Re: Query - The Butterfly Key- revision now on page 6

KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK ----- Again Dear Agent, Shortly after Christian Bryson promises to fulfill his wife’s dream of starting a family, his Army Reserve unit deploys for war. In battle, Christian sustains a wound which renders him incapable of fathering children. Devastated, Christian...
by Tycoon
February 8th, 2010, 5:44 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: The Valley and the Shadow - new version page 3
Replies: 26
Views: 4346

Re: Query: The Valley and the Shadow

This is the one you should go with.. I rearranged it... tell me what you think. Lucinda’s fate has always been dictated by circumstances beyond her control. So when she is offered liberation from the cruel world of the living she turns her back on God. Forsaking the light of the His sun, she embrac...
by Tycoon
February 8th, 2010, 5:22 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - The Butterfly Key- revision now on page 6
Replies: 56
Views: 6785

Re: Query - The Butterfly Key- revision now on page 5

KK again again again Dear Agent, Shortly after Christian Bryson promises to fulfill his wife’s dream of starting a family, his Army Reserve unit deploys for war. In battle, Christian sustains a wound which renders him incapable of fathering children. Devastated, Christian agonizes over telling Abiga...