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by OneChoice1
January 6th, 2010, 12:36 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Critique - Zombie Queen
Replies: 16
Views: 3257

Re: Query Critique - Zombie Queen

Wow, very creative. Different take of zombies. I have a question about the title though. Is the zombie queen the main issue? The main topic of the novel? All and all, i wish you the best of luck. I hope this helped. I’m polishing up the old WIP and thought it might be high time to start on the dread...
by OneChoice1
January 5th, 2010, 9:34 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Status: Under Construction
Replies: 30
Views: 5198

Re: Query Status: Under Construction

Okay, more details on the way. Dear [Agent's name]: What the world doesn’t give you, the world can’t take away. It all has to do with faith. Use Somebody is an inspirational romance and is approximately 156,000 words. Seven year olds are typically found playing with their friends, swimming, riding b...
by OneChoice1
January 5th, 2010, 3:21 pm
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Old Ask Nathan Thread
Replies: 793
Views: 191229

Re: Ask Nathan

If I've revised a query that I've already sent out, should I wait for a reply from the agent before I resend the query? Should I resend even after rejection?
by OneChoice1
January 5th, 2010, 2:48 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Status: Under Construction
Replies: 30
Views: 5198

Re: Query Status: Under Construction

Take two: here is a revised version. Dear [Agent's name]: What the world doesn’t give you, the world can’t take away. It all has to do with faith. Use Somebody is an inspirational romance for 16 and up. It is approximately 156,000 words. Seventeen year old Drakel Davis is the mastermind of the bigge...
by OneChoice1
January 5th, 2010, 2:11 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Status: Under Construction
Replies: 30
Views: 5198

Re: Query Status: Under Construction

Any comments about personalized sentences? Can i do without them?
by OneChoice1
January 5th, 2010, 1:53 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Status: Under Construction
Replies: 30
Views: 5198

Re: Query Status: Under Construction

You hit dead on with a concern of mine: rhetorical questions. This is exactly what i needed. Thank you
by OneChoice1
January 5th, 2010, 1:46 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query critique RYAN WRITES A BOOK
Replies: 5
Views: 1368

Re: Query critique RYAN WRITES A BOOK

Great title and wise choice of genre. Your book is not exactly like it, of course, but the Neverending Story came to my mind. I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR COMMENTS: At some point every boy has to face the question: has he outgrown monster stories? Must he put away his velociraptors, his transformers, his ...
by OneChoice1
January 5th, 2010, 12:30 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Status: Under Construction
Replies: 30
Views: 5198

Query Status: Under Construction

*See third page for revised version* I've sat down and created my manuscript. I've revised it more than once. I got all excited, sent out the query, and got rejected. Now that that's out of my system (not entirely, but good enough), I'm ready to get back to it. It's all about perseverance, right? I ...