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by thewordsmith
July 14th, 2011, 3:15 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

TITLE: Funeral Rights GENRE: thriller WORD COUNT: 250 "I beg your pardon!" Derek Wainright plowed through the entrance to the Federal Building and directly into one of the most beautiful women he had ever seen. She was trim, slender, with long, silky straight brown hair, pale skin, and dark blue eye...