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by bighockeyhair
June 3rd, 2011, 5:38 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query-YA paranormal thriller NEWEST ATTEMPT IN POST #16
Replies: 18
Views: 2845

Re: Query-YA paranormal thriller

I've tried to incorporate as much of the feedback as I could (almost all I think), and here's what I came up with. Hope it's moving in the right direction. I am seeking representation for CURSED, a 77,000 word paranormal thriller for young adults. Seventeen-year-old outcast Lysander Shore is determi...
by bighockeyhair
June 2nd, 2011, 2:46 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query-YA paranormal thriller NEWEST ATTEMPT IN POST #16
Replies: 18
Views: 2845

Re: Query-YA paranormal thriller

Great Feedback! Thanks so much.
by bighockeyhair
June 1st, 2011, 11:53 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: REDDO, YA Urban Fantasy LAST POST
Replies: 20
Views: 3466

Re: REDDO, YA Urban Fantasy EDITED 5/25

Note: 3 things...Thanks so much for posting 'Newest Draft' it made finding this very easy. 2) I haven't looked at earlier versions 3) I'm a newb so take it with a gain. Four things come to mind when eighteen-year-old Sophie Rowan thinks about the Kedoas. Maybe I'm just slow, but I don't see those f...
by bighockeyhair
June 1st, 2011, 5:35 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query-YA paranormal thriller NEWEST ATTEMPT IN POST #16
Replies: 18
Views: 2845

Query-YA paranormal thriller NEWEST ATTEMPT IN POST #16

LATEST ATTEMPT IN POST #16 I've been beating this novel up and down the street for a while now without much luck. It had an agent championing it quite enthusiastically for about 6 months or so, but then 2008 happened and she returned to focus on her area of specialty (non-fiction). For the most par...
by bighockeyhair
June 1st, 2011, 5:18 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Horror of Hayesfield- first 2900
Replies: 2
Views: 1040

Re: Horror of Hayesfield- first 2900

I didn't get through all of this, but I'll be happy to give you my impressions from what I did read. I liked that the main character lives in his own private world. I thought dipping in and out of the journal was done well overall. What bogs down your story, in my mind, are large block paragraphs wh...
by bighockeyhair
June 1st, 2011, 5:01 pm
Forum: Town Hall
Topic: The Introduction Thread
Replies: 616
Views: 192379

Re: The Introduction Thread

Hi all,

I'm a thriller writer currently working on my 2rd novel. I'm still unpublished, but soldiering on. Nathan's website is a great asset and I'm thrilled I found it.

Best,
BHH